Madurai Visit sample WRITTEN ENGLISH GRAMMAR CORRECTIONS English Training through Tamil

 WRITTEN ENGLISH GRAMMAR CORRECTIONS SAMPLE "Madurai Visit"

Note :  Corrected sentences starts with."+++"  symbol

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My Madurai Visit

I visited Madurai on Monday, 26th Dec 2016

+++I visited Madurai on Monday, 26th Dec 2016.
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I from Salem to Madurai

+++I travelled by train from Salem to Madurai.

The schedule time of train from Salem is 23.00 hrs.

+++The  scheduled departure time of the train from Salem was 23.00 hrs.

it got delayed for 30 minutes

+++ However, it got delayed for 30 minutes.

which  starts from Bangalore enroute via Salem .

+++This train starts at Bangalore and reaches Madurai en route Salem.

I got in to train and departed at 11.45pm and reached Madurai at 3.30 am.

+++I got into the train in time. And it departed Salem at 11.45pm. It reached Madurai at 3.30 am.

I reached hotel from station by walk.

+++I reached the hotel from the station by walk.

after checked in Hotel, travelled  from lobby to room by lift.

+++After the checking in procedure at the lobby, I went to my room by a lift.

While moving in lift it got struck due to power failure.

+++While I was in the lift, it suddenly stopped  due to power failure.

It moved after few minutes

+++However, after a few minutes it started moving.

 and slept for 3 hours and waked up.

+++I reached my room and changed to night ware. Then I slept for about 3 hours.


. I got ready in 8.00am and visited in and around Madurai and met important clients and distributed new year gifts.

+++I woke up at 7.00am . I got ready by 8.00am. Then I came out of my hotel and took a taxi / auto and met our important clients in and around Madurai and distributed our New Year gifts.

after completed work return back to city and had lunch in traditional hotel SRIRAM MESS.

+++After completing this work, I returned back to the city and had lunch in our traditional hotel, SRIRAM MESS.

The food was very tasty like homely food.

+++The food was very tasty like our home food (or the food was homely).

I tried return ticket for Salem.
+++I tried to get a return train ticket to Salem.

But could not get ticket in train due to festival season.
+++ But I could not get it due to the festival season rush.

finally I got ticket luckily n bus.

+++Luckily, I got a bus ticket to Salem.

I vacated hotel and reached bus stand around 5.30 pm.

+++I vacated the hotel and reached the bus stand around 5.30 pm.

I board in bus and seated. It departed at 5.45pm.

+++I boarded the bus and sat in my place.  (or got myself seated).It departed at 5.45pm.

while travelling  watched Vadivel comedy and slept few minutes.

+++While travelling, I watched Vadivel cinema comedy scenes in the bus TV for a few minutes. Then I slept off.

I reached Salem around 11 .OK PM.

+++I reached Salem around 11 o' clock.

 I got down in thiru va koundana Circle.

+++ I got down at the Thiruva Koundanur Circle.

from bus stop to residence travelled in auto.
Reached home safely.

+++From there I took an auto to my residence. I reached home safely.

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MY COMMENTS

Excellent attempt Mr Bhoopathy (name changed)

Keep it up.

Remember the more mistakes you make, the faster you learn.

If you just send 10 or 15 matter like this, your WRITTEN ENGLISH will definitely go to the NEXT LEVEL.
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Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam
Tamil based English Trainer, worldwide.
Salem, South India.