WRITTEN ENGLISH grammar correction SAMPLE -BPO HR LETTER
ENGLISH TRAINING THROUGH whatsapp
BAD ENGLISH letter FROM a BPO COMPANY situated in SALEM.
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BAD ENGLISH letter FROM a BPO COMPANY situated in SALEM.
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Friends,
I was very shocked to get a POORLY WRITTEN English letter from the H R Officer of a BPO COMPANY located in Salem (via whatsapp).
No doubt it speaks volumes of their quality.
ANYWAY I SHOULD THANK "THAT GENTLEMAN" FOR SUPPLYING ME A LETTER WITH GRAMMAR MISTAKES. ONLY BECAUSE OF THAT I AM ABLE TO CREATE THIS grammar correction MATTER AS BELOW.
PLEASE NOTE THAT IN THE MATTER BELOW...
my grammar corrections or comments start with
"==" symbol
before each sentence.
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Dear Sir/Mam,
==Dear Sir / Madam,
==To emphasis spoken English you may write ma'm (with apostrophe) but "Mam" is wrong.
Hope you doing Well..
== I hope you are doing well.
("are" is missing).
==To close friends you may write "Hope you are .." instead of... "I HOPE YOU ARE..." dropping the ... "I"
BETTER WORDS / SENTENCE
==I wish that this letter finds you in good health and fine spirits.
I am Prakashraj (name changed) ABC healthcare services – HR Officer.
==I am Prakashraj ABC Healthcare Services - HR Officer.
(First letters CAPITALS required for company names).
Now we recruiting US Voice process fresher’s at Salem.
== Now we are recruiting US Voice Process Freshers at Salem.
=="we are recruiting" (.."are"... missing)
== "Freshers" should not have apostrophe ( ' ) So ** fresher's ** is wrong.
Job description:
Education: Any degree / diploma
Skills: Good communication in English and basic computer knowledge
== Skills: Good communication skills in English and basic computer knowledge.
(the word "skills /abilities / talent" ... is compulsory)
Job location: Salem Salary: Best in industry Job openings: 25+ hires
(Flexible for Night Shift)
Contact & Venue:
Prakashraj HR – 98765 12345 (dummy)
Mail : careers.spa@dummy.com
No: 123/45 dummy Road,
Area Near 5 Roads,
Salem – 636004.
(Near New Bus stand)
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Grammar Corrections
by
Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam,
Tamil based English Trainer,
Salem
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