BPO HR LETTER WRITTEN ENGLISH grammar correction SAMPLE EZHILARASAN

WRITTEN ENGLISH grammar correction SAMPLE -BPO HR LETTER 

ENGLISH TRAINING THROUGH whatsapp

BAD ENGLISH letter FROM a BPO COMPANY situated in SALEM.
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Friends,

I was very shocked to get a POORLY WRITTEN English letter from the H R Officer of a BPO COMPANY located in Salem (via whatsapp).

No doubt it speaks volumes of their quality.

ANYWAY I SHOULD THANK "THAT GENTLEMAN" FOR SUPPLYING ME A LETTER WITH GRAMMAR MISTAKES. ONLY BECAUSE OF THAT I AM ABLE TO CREATE THIS grammar correction MATTER AS BELOW.

PLEASE NOTE THAT IN THE MATTER BELOW...
my grammar corrections or comments start with
"==" symbol
before each sentence.

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Dear Sir/Mam,

==Dear Sir / Madam,

==To emphasis spoken English you may write ma'm (with apostrophe) but "Mam" is wrong.

Hope you doing Well..

== I hope you are doing well.
("are" is missing).

==To close friends you may write "Hope you are .." instead of... "I HOPE YOU ARE..." dropping  the ... "I"

BETTER WORDS / SENTENCE 

==I wish that this letter finds you in good health and fine spirits.

I am Prakashraj (name changed) ABC healthcare services – HR Officer.

==I am  Prakashraj  ABC Healthcare Services - HR Officer.

(First letters CAPITALS required for company names).

Now we recruiting US Voice process fresher’s at Salem.

== Now we are recruiting US Voice Process Freshers at Salem.
=="we are recruiting" (.."are"... missing)
== "Freshers" should not have apostrophe ( ' ) So ** fresher's ** is wrong.

Job description:
Education: Any degree / diploma                                   
Skills: Good communication in English and basic computer knowledge                                                                                       
== Skills: Good communication skills in English and basic computer knowledge.
(the word  "skills /abilities / talent" ... is compulsory)

Job location:  Salem                                                        Salary: Best in industry                                                  Job openings: 25+ hires
(Flexible for Night Shift)

Contact  & Venue:

Prakashraj HR – 98765 12345 (dummy)
Mail : careers.spa@dummy.com

No: 123/45 dummy Road,
Area Near 5 Roads,
Salem – 636004.
(Near New Bus stand)

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Grammar Corrections
by
Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam,
Tamil based English Trainer,
Salem