Written English grammar correction sample 0917

grammar correction sample 0917-  Written English 

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Friends,

On September 17, 2019 someone contacted me for English Training via Whatsapp. Since he/she was in office, his/her messages were very short.

Copy of his/her messages and my response given  below.

Her/His sentences start with the (*) symbols

My reply starts with "=="

Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam
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Written English grammar correction sample 0917
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(*) I am planning to join class through Skype or Whatsapp

== Dear Candidate,
OK, you are welcome.

(*) Could you confirm course fee and duration
 

== The word "confirm" should be avoided in first contact. I have not told you anything "before", to CONFIRM IT.

==Better say...  "Please tell your current course fee, Sir."

(*) Course duration

== 12 hours  per module.

(*) Course fee.... through mobile

== Rs.xxx / hour (if you are employed)
== Rs.yyy / hour (if you are studying)
== Rs.zzz / half hour
(if you are in.. "very tough time".

== We will try for a week,
before we plan long term)

(*) duration
== as long as your want. However, 6 months you should work hard. First two months we join together, later it is your choice to extend further)

(*) timing after 8.00pm
== ok for me (59 minutes maximum, provided you get 50% in my simple ENTRANCE TEST)

(*) could you confirm above to proceed further. == NA

(*) Weekly 5 classes
== we will decide later

(*) I will send amount transfer for one month as advance.
== Please just send Rs.150 # first and clear my ENTRANCE TEST (through mobile voice chat)

(*) Give your best rate..

== Please understand my basic approach is Guru ... sishya (not seller and buyer).

Like mother feeding milk to her baby I "feed" you English with "LOVE AND AFFECTION". (Not for money alone).

Like a small seed turn into a flower or a big tree...I should slowly build up your confidence level step by step.
Suddenly like a bud open into a flower...
YOUR ENGLISH WILL JUST jump to  NEXT LEVEL.

It is a team work.
EVERYDAY YOU SHOULD WORK HARD.
Like a farmer daily caring for the seed.... watering, sunlight, nutrients etc ...

(*) Normally I never negotiate. == NA.

== You have not told your MOTHER TONGUE. It should be Tamil, only then our classes will be easy.

== Best wishes. God bless you.

Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam, Salem.
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(.) Before sending it on the next day morning,on September 18th, further I wrote.

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Hey, good morning friend.

You did not reply properly to my messages.
Why ?
Help not required from me ?

WHEN A BABY CRIES FOR BREAST MILK.
THE MOTHER WILL RUSH TO FEED HER.

LOT OF HORMONES WILL SUDDENLY BE SECRETED IN HER BLOOD STREAM AND WITHIN A FEW MINUTES ... MILK WILL START COMING FROM HER NIPPLES.

SOMETHING SIMILAR HAPPENED TO ME, YESTERDAY.

I changed your messages as my WRITTEN ENGLISH grammar correction "sample" matter.
(Attached above).

Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam
Tamil based English Trainer
Salem.