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Written English Grammar Correction - sample -elephant

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TAMIL TRANSLATION- தமிழில்

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Student's mini essay Translation

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TITLE: ELEPHANT 

DATE:  02-05-2021

Written by student

1) When I was child to this day every saturday i will going to "Permual Temple"  in Kumbakonam. That kovil inside big chain noises, moving ears and legs a standing the big elephant.

2) That elephant name is a Ramu. i well saw him activities. Elephant body only big, but it's mind just small children.

3) Ramu leg was tied in Big iron chain, that elephant breeder hold small stick in hands. However if that elephant thinks, breaking of chainsand it's uncontrollable that elephant breeder stick. That elephant bound to love.

4) Ramu breeder will stand near by ramu Then that  elephant playing to him.

5) Elephant is bound to love. From antiquity to the present day, The elephant is one of the animals that live together with humans.

6) Humans can keep one thing in mind and talk something outside, but can't be with Elephant. Because Elephant's is easy to well feel a mind  ,it's is more ability.

Correction by teacher 

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Correction Version-2 -- TITLE: ELEPHANT 

DATE:  02-05-2021

1) Since my childhood till today, every Saturday I will be going to "Permual Temple"  in Kumbakonam. Inside that temple there will be an elephant tied with chains. It will be standing and moving its ears and legs. Its movement will make noises from the big chain.

2) That elephant's name is Ramu. I will keenly observe his activities. I would be thinking that only its body was big, but its behaviour was just like a child. 

3) Ramu's legs were tied with a big iron chain. And the mahoot or elephant tender held a small stick in his hand.  If that elephant thinks, it can easily break off from the chains and never bother about the stick in his hand. However, I feel that the elephant is bound by his love.

4) When the caretaker stands near  Ramu, it will start playing with him.

5) To repeat, from antiquity to the present day, elephants are bound by love. The elephants are one of the few animals that live in harmony with humans.

6) Humans can keep one thing in mind and talk something outside, but this can't be done with an elephant. This is because elephants are skillful in knowing your true feelings.

Corrected by

Ezhilarasan Venkatachalam

Salem

Tamil Based Online English Trainer